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Post by Edward Eric on Jul 19, 2007 11:47:35 GMT -5
Name: Edward Elric
Nickname: Ed
Age: 18
Gender: male
Job: resteraunt waiter, wants to be in the military.
Grade: senior
Clubs: Anime Club
Cooking Club
Science club
Family: (al messed up on this)
TRISHA elric HOENHEIME elric Alphonse Elric
Personality: Ed is a smart, ambitious 18 year old. He loves science and tecnology, and is always ready to learn. His favorite food is spagetti and parmesan cheese. Ed dislikes milk but will eat products with milk in them. Ed loves to make stuff for him adn his brother Al.
The boy is caring and compassionate. Ed is never far from his brother and is the only family he has left. Ed would even give his life for Al. Ed is like Al's father ina sense. He is always looking out for him. If Al goes down, ed does as well.
Ed can be a bit grumpy, but he is a sweet, gentle young man. Edward always is looking out for people and enjoys playing the hero. Edward hates short hair, which is why he grew it out long. Edward is a master braider, and won an award for it. Ed is short for his age, only 5'6". Another important thing is Ed's right arm is metal because he lost it in a serious car accident.
Stuff we forgot: He hates people calling his short.
History: (also al's. al let me use it. modified to fit eds pov)
Ed was born in a small town with not many people. A place where everyone knew your name, he lived in a big house since his dad was the mayor which was always annoyed him since he never had time for him and his brother. It had been like that ever since mom died which was hard on all of them, especially edward. His dad said they would move after his term was done. No one ever understood how ed felt, not even his dad.
And that’s what happened they moved out to a bigger town and suprisingly his dad stayed out of politics and spent more time with Al and himself. Ed didn't really care. He despised his father for never showing up for his mother's funeral. He wanted to lead Al away, but he always refused, saying that hoenheime was great. And then dad left...
Adapting to a new school was even harder since he was thrown in after the school year started with no friends at all. Ed didn't care though. And was also different then his last school since it had dorms. Ed liked this, because it meant he didnt have to go home. He wanted a dorm so to afford it he had to get a job so he went to the a resteraunt to sign up as a waiter, but he really wanted to work in the military. It would give him enough money to care for al and himself..
Physical Description:
* metal arm and leg. *5'6"
The story behind his arm:
Yes im sure you've seen edward. But he keeps his real identity a secret. he wears white gloves on his hands to cover his right hand. You will rarely see ed in a short sleeves.
OK, so ive just explained his limbs. How did he get them? Well, edward was driving home with a friend from a party. Of course, you know teenagers. Ed didn't know it but his friend was drunk. While driving, Ed's friend fell asleep. Lucky for hed he was in the front seat. But ti was too late. The car swerved off the road. Mind you this was on the edge of a shallow hill. It wasn't a big drop, but it was big enough to caus ean explosion. the driver died, and ed lived, but hsi arm adn lef had to be anputated because they wer epermenantly damaged. the doctor came up with a machine arm adn leg, titanium mund you, and ed was forever grateful. Now he has a metal lef tleg and a metal right arm; titanium.
Roleplaying Sample:
Edward elric padded through the damp and dingy halls of his new school. Heh, this was going to be a problem. he hated it anyway. Why was he stuck in thsis chool again? Oh yeah, because dad kicked him out. Ecen trhough he knew that wasn't the case, ed still felt that way. he missed his mother terribly, and hated his father for not showing up at her funeral.
Edward turned a corner. Al was the only special thing left with him. His fahter had dissapeared adn Ed had to take responsability for being the oldest. And ed didn't want al to meet new people. It might shatter their bond. No, Edward thought. Nothing like that will happen.
There wasn't much point in walking anymore, so Ed sat down ona nearby bench. His blonde hair was neatly braided and bangs stuck out from each side of his forehead. He had a black collared shirt under a red adn black robe, and clean black oants with onyx colored boots with red soles. He flexed his right arm. All good. Smiling he got up. Lookinga the clock he cursed lightly. He was going to be late for chemistry. Darting off, he never even realized he had left a picture of trisha on the bench.
Password: Fructous
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Post by Risa Ellisa on Jul 19, 2007 11:51:23 GMT -5
Erm. You can have prostetic limbs but I don't believe that they have metal arms in real life, then again it seems they do. If you are going to do that you also need to explain how you got them in the first place. It also must be heavy with metal. I would have done something like titanium.
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Post by Edward Eric on Jul 19, 2007 11:54:21 GMT -5
titanium? ok. their fake limbs. he lost his real ones.
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Post by Risa Ellisa on Jul 19, 2007 11:56:30 GMT -5
Due to what? How did he lose them. You can't say alchemy. Also, you can't use Al's history. I noticed the similarities. If you want to be related to our al you need to ask him and you also need to name your family after his. If he wants you to use his history you may.
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Post by Edward Eric on Jul 19, 2007 12:01:33 GMT -5
fixed.
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Post by Edward Eric on Jul 19, 2007 12:02:11 GMT -5
we talked about it. he messed up ont the names and is going to change them. I alos asked him about using the hist. he said it was al right. he said he couldn;t modify the names so once he cna he will.
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Post by Risa Ellisa on Jul 19, 2007 12:03:34 GMT -5
Alright then. I guess it's fine unless Al says you did something wrong. Good job! ^^
--Approved--
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